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When you try

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When you are having a rough time it's fustrating to fix what you messed up. It's a troublesome. I know how its like to mess up with everything no no no. when you try you sometimes fail ooh. But if you dont try then you will alway's fail oh no. But dont give up. If you fail just keep on going. When you try you might just get right. I know how it feels like to mess up with everything. Like when you argue with your friend or with someone you care about. When you try. When you try. Just keep keep moving on,on. You'll alway's try to fix it even though it's getting harder and harder ooh. Just keep on going "oh". When you try, you might get some good luck. So just keep moving on,on. when you are having a rough time it's fustrating to fix what you messed up. When you try, you might fall down. I know how it feels like to mess up with everything even when you try even when you try,try. Ooh hey yeah. Just keep moving on. Never give up and make it slide. When you try make sure that you would never give up. Even though it's getting harder and harder to fix what you messed up. It's a troublesome. I know how it feels like to mess up with everything, even when you try. And it keeps on getting harder and harder.
this is a song call when you try and i wrote this song becuz ive seen alot of people gave up and taht really upsetted me cuz they tried sooo hard to become a dancer, an artist, even one tried to become an athlete and i just told them to keep on trying and never give up even when you try and they finally listened and i also told them that ill be writing a song for yall for all of ur hard works and they were like awsome and they also never knew i worte songs before till a couple of months ago and ive been kepping this song for a long time and forgot to post it but srry for forgetting to post it but i hope yall will like my song ^^

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CourierDan's avatar
Listening to Shadow of the Day and reading this, it reminds me that giving up shouldn't be an acceptable choice. Maybe things will go my way by refusing to surrender. Thanks for having this up.